Exercises

Directions: Copy and Paste. Following the example, rewrite the following rule violations.

answers

1. The Community School soccer team has the most talented group of players in years they never doubted that they would win the state soccer tournament.

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2. Reading Paradise Lost is difficult but rewarding for the language is odd but the themes and descritpitions are wonderful and the characters are God, Satan, and Adam and Eve.

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3. After two days of waxing, tuning, and scraping his skate skis, Josh knew they were ready for the race on Saturday he agreed with his coach that they could no be in better shape.

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4. Phil's whole life revolved around catching trout he could think of nothing else more important than fishing.

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5. We packed our belongings carefully, but we forgot to include toothpaste, so the next morning we had to rush out and buy some before we could brush our teeth, and so we were late in meeting our tour group, but fortunately they were too considerate to leave without us.

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6. Billionaire Paul Getty was the richest man in the world, and he had been married five times, but all of his wives died, but he did not want a sixth marriage, for a fortune teller told him that he would die shortly after his sixth marriage.

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7. I began reading Carl Jung's book on adolescent psychology, but it was hard to understand, so I put it down and began playing solitaire instead, but the game soon bored me, and so I lay back and went to sleep.

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8. A number of animal species have been disappearing , but fortunately many of these vanishing species reproduce themselves in captivity, and recently such a reproduction took place at the zoo in Buffalo, and a baby Panda named Zulu was born.

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9. Victims of skin cancer run a high risk of developing other forms of cancer, and those other forms are likely to be more serious, so all people with skin cancer should visit their doctor at least once a year, and this practice should continue even after the skin cancer has been cured.

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10. Of all the indigenous cultures in the world with a reverence for nature, the imminent loss of the aborigines, who protect the pristine quality of their birth place, is surely the greatest, they are taught by their mothers to know their birth place and insrure that this place remains ecologically intact.

ANSWERS:

1. The Community School soccer team has the most talented group of players in years they never doubted that they would win the state soccer tournament.

1. The Community School soccer team has the most talented group of players in years; they never doubted that they would win the state soccer tournament.

2. Reading Paradise Lost is difficult but rewarding for the language is odd but the themes and descritpitions are wonderful and the characters are God, Satan, and Adam and Eve.

2. Reading Paradise Lost is difficult but rewarding, for the language is odd, but the themes, descritpitions, and the characters: God, Satan, and Adam and Eve are wonderful.

3. After two days of waxing, tuning, and scraping his skate skis, Josh knew they were ready for the race on Saturday he agreed with his coach that they could no be in better shape.

3. After two days of waxing, tuning, and scraping his skate skis, Josh knew they were ready for the race on Saturday. He agreed with his coach that they could no be in better shape.

4. Phil's whole life revolved around catching trout he could think of nothing else more important than fishing.

4. Phil's whole life revolved around catching trout; he could think of nothing else more important than fishing.

5. We packed our belongings carefully, but we forgot to include toothpaste, so the next morning we had to rush out and buy some before we could brush our teeth, and so we were late in meeting our tour group, but fortunately they were too considerate to leave without us.

5. We packed our belongings carefully, but we forgot to include toothpaste, so the next morning we had to rush out and buy some before we could brush our teeth. As a result, we were late in meeting our tour group, but fortunately they were too considerate to leave without us.

6. Billionaire Paul Getty was the richest man in the world, and he had been married five times, but all of his wives died, but he did not want a sixth marriage, for a fortune teller told him that he would die shortly after his sixth marriage.

6. Billionaire Paul Getty, the richest man in the world, had been married five times, but all of his wives died. He did not want a sixth marriage, for a fortune teller told him that he would die shortly after his sixth marriage.

7. I began reading Carl Jung's book on adolescent psychology, but it was hard to understand, so I put it down and began playing solitaire instead, but the game soon bored me, and so I lay back and went to sleep.

7. I began reading Carl Jung's book on adolescent psychology, but it was hard to understand, so I put it down and began playing solitaire instead. The game soon bored me, and so I lay back and went to sleep.

8. A number of animal species have been disappearing , but fortunately many of these vanishing species reproduce themselves in captivity, and recently such a reproduction took place at the zoo in Buffalo, and a baby Panda named Zulu was born.

8. A number of animal species have been disappearing , but fortunately many of these vanishing species reproduce themselves in captivity. For example, a reproduction took place recently at the zoo in Buffalo, and a baby Panda named Zulu was born.

9. Victims of skin cancer run a high risk of developing other forms of cancer, and those other forms are likely to be more serious, so all people with skin cancer should visit their doctor at least once a year, and this practice should continue even after the skin cancer has been cured.

9. Victims of skin cancer run a high risk of developing other forms of cancer, and those other forms are likely to be more serious. Because of this fact, all people with skin cancer should visit their doctor at least once a year, and this practice should continue even after the skin cancer has been cured.

10.Of all the indigenous cultures in the world with a reverence for nature, the imminent loss of the aborigines, who protect the pristine quality of their birth place, is surely the greatest, they are taught by their mothers to know their birth place and insrure that this place remains ecologically intact.

10. Of all the indigenous cultures in the world with a reverence for nature, the loss of the aborigines, who protect the pristine quality of their birth place, is surely the greatest. They are taught by their mothers to know their birth place and insrure that this place remains ecologically intact.